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Post by Flying Horse on Jul 6, 2013 10:45:47 GMT -5
The Were Not Kidding in the Fourteenth Century by Maureen McLane
They were not kidding when they said they were blinded by a vision of love.
It was not just a manner of speaking or feeling though it's hard to say
how the dead really felt harder even than knowing the living.
You are so opaque to me your brief moments of apparent transparency
seem fraudulent windows in a Brutalist structure everyone admires.
The effort your life requires exhausts me. I am not kidding.
Maureen McLane's most recent book of poems is World Enough (2011). She is also the author of My Poets (2012), an experimental hybrid of memoir and criticism which was a finalist for the 2012 National Book Critics Circle Award in Autobiography. McLane teaches at New York University.
About This Poem "This poem will appear in my forthcoming book This Blue (Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2014)--a book devoted in part to ecology and transformations of courtly love, not least Dante's vision. The poem most likely springs from ongoing reading in and around Dante and Petrarch and troubadours as well as reading in the book of life. I'm interested in historical and lyrical conjunctures: contemporary intimacies and opacities, shot through by deep pasts and unknown futures."
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Post by Royston Vasey on Jul 25, 2013 11:22:15 GMT -5
I don't recall posting this poem here previously, but if I have posted it before then please forgive this Lament's repetition.
Chorister's Lament
And what of skylarks? Are they guarantor Of dreamy days and easy sleep laid low By Shylock-pursed refuseniks who ignore A static summer state? Thereby to - woe Betide us - see testosterone prevailing (Disastrously for Aled Jones and other Practitioners of high-pitched tunes), unveiling A rush for adulthood by boys, to smother All vestiges of prepubescent tells. Defaulting, losing songbirds, wayward balls, Are all resultant of our changing selves - We pay the butcher's bill when Nature calls. And what of skylarks, what of balls, one's youth? - They fly away or drop or pass, forsooth.
Go well.
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Post by Flying Horse on Jul 26, 2013 18:14:38 GMT -5
I don't recall reading that poem before. Thanks - I enjoyed it.
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Post by Flying Horse on Jul 26, 2013 18:21:25 GMT -5
I Am Not Yours by Sara Teasdale I am not yours, not lost in you, Not lost, although I long to be Lost as a candle lit at noon, Lost as a snowflake in the sea.
You love me, and I find you still A spirit beautiful and bright, Yet I am I, who long to be Lost as a light is lost in light.
Oh plunge me deep in love—put out My senses, leave me deaf and blind, Swept by the tempest of your love, A taper in a rushing wind.
Born in 1884, Sara Trevor Teasdale's work was characterized by its simplicity and clarity and her use of classical forms.
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Post by Royston Vasey on Jul 27, 2013 7:31:10 GMT -5
Hi Pegasus,
I'm happy that you liked my tongue-in-cheek Shakespearean sonnet.
The Sarah Teasdale poem that you posted brought bodice-busting passion, heaving bosoms and something of Courtly Love to mind. And those aren't bad things. Lovely.
Go well.
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Post by Flying Horse on Jul 28, 2013 17:52:05 GMT -5
It was a hard thing to undo this knot by Gerard Manley Hopkins It was a hard thing to undo this knot. The rainbow shines, but only in the thought Of him that looks. Yet not in that alone, For who makes rainbows by invention? And many standing round a waterfall See one bow each, yet not the same to all, But each a hand's breadth further than the next. The sun on falling waters writes the text Which yet is in the eye or in the thought. It was a hard thing to undo this knot.
The fragment "It was a hard thing to undo this knot" is one of Hopkins's few surviving early poems; after making the decision to join the Society of Jesus, Hopkins burned most of his early work, believing at the time that poetry was distracting him from his religious calling.
Gerard Manley Hopkins was born on July 28, 1844, near London. A Jesuit priest, he devoted most of his time to his religion, but is best remembered today for the inventive and ingeniously musical verse he wrote in private. Hopkins died in 1889.
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Post by trevorw2539 on Jul 29, 2013 6:41:18 GMT -5
How about something lighthearted.
He sat at the front all pensive and sad When really he should be happy and glad. Was this the moment of which he had dreamed Or the finale for which another had schemed.
It started promisingly a long time ago. He remembered the time - his life in full flow. A night with the boys, drinks at the bar. Laughter and joking, an ever full jar. (glass for those in the USA)
Life seemed so full, no worries, no cares, When events overtook him - all unawares. Open swung the door, and in came a troupe Of very noisy girls - she leading the group.
What was the attraction, the smile that she gave When she saw him looking, and gave him a wave? Startled and puzzled, in turn he waved back And from that time life's course took a tack.
She made the advance, though it did seem strange. They had never met, she was not in the range Of his usual girls. But that didn't matter She'd the skill and charm, him to flatter.
They dated, and mated, got on well together And it didn't seem he was tied to a tether. Very slowly she gained his love and his trust. Any resistance he had quickly turned into dust.
One evening at dinner with friends someone said When are you lovebirds going to get wed. She looked at him, and the look in her eye Said 'shall we, shan't we, and if not, WHY?
A proposal was made, and the date was set, Now all that was needed was a place to get All the guests together, both Church and Hall, But big enough to have a ball.
Now the day is here, and so is the groom Thinking 'is this a day for joy or gloom'. I always intended single to stay. How did things turn out this way?
When the Wedding March on the Organ is playing Will I still be here, desperately praying That all will be well, life will be grand When I put on her finger that little gold band.
Ah . The music’s now playing it's far too late, In the hands of a woman hangs another mans fate. Just like Adam in the hands of Eve Men have reason to cry and......
Er. You can finish it. I guess I'm in enough trouble with the ladies now
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Post by Royston Vasey on Jul 29, 2013 13:51:32 GMT -5
Thanks for that, Pegasus. Interesting info too.
Go well.
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Post by Royston Vasey on Jul 29, 2013 14:17:58 GMT -5
Hi Trevor,
This is good, though it'd (for me) benefit from being shorter. I reckon this manner of poem needs to be snappy and to the point. Many of the stanzas have a lovely rhythm, good.
S3 L3 ("Open swung the door, and in came a troupe") struck me as oddly worded; why the pre-comma inversion when The door swung open, and in came a troupe was readily available.
Thanks for posting your work here.
Go well.
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Post by Flying Horse on Aug 11, 2013 20:09:59 GMT -5
Experiment in Divination: Voice and Character by Rebecca Wolff There is a curiosity that knows I know deathless ceiling of unknowing I know Querent, Who I ask is changing all the time changing now changed. How else is one to know How is one to know how to proceed the course of action a non-reflective surface a playing card on a wooden picnic table a knot of knowing on a node of playing How is one to know How else is one to know how to proceed How is one to make the motion against And there's forever and that's a mighty long time.
"This is one of a group or series of 'Experiments in Voice and Character'; it is either the first or the last, I haven't decided, but so far it is the only one that announces its thematic material in its title. The divinatory practice it concerns itself with is the reading of cards; it concerns itself with longing for an answer when we cannot have an answer, the intense longing that provokes a certainty that there is a way of knowing if only we had it. And then we do." --Rebecca Wolff's third collection of poems is The King (W. W. Norton, 2010). Wolff is the founder and editor of the journal Fence and she lives in Athens, NY.
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Post by Royston Vasey on Aug 13, 2013 8:22:16 GMT -5
Hi Pegasus,
Though not my cup of tea, I thought this was interesting. My thinking is that the piece begs for the inclusion of a question mark, though no doubt the poetess had her reasons for denying one.
Here is an entirely traditional (Shakespearean sonnet) offering from my pen:
The Road Taken
As latter-day size tens recount the route to school: a duffeled youth, not dead but passed, calls from within his nemesis to scoot or miss the bell; Be wary of the massed impediments before you - there are dragons, witches with a taste for blood, and streams of fire, he whispers. Monsters? - magic flagons deny them charcoal treats, while laser beams --well aimed-- reduce a coven into dust. And every weekday boy who walks on pavement knows one foot on a crack and he'll combust. Yes, lads learn young, or die, or find enslavement. A potion-throwing, laser-toting man who minds his step is mates with Peter Pan.
Go well.
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Post by Flying Horse on Aug 16, 2013 19:54:57 GMT -5
Royston - An amusing poem. Funny, I was always told - "Step on a crack and break your mother's back." I spent many a walk home from school makings sure I missed those cracks!!
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Post by Flying Horse on Aug 16, 2013 20:00:13 GMT -5
Elders by Louise Bogan At night the moon shakes the bright dice of the water; And the elders, their flower light as broken snow upon the bush, Repeat the circle of the moon.
Within the month Black fruit breaks from the white flower. The black-wheeled berries turn Weighing the boughs over the road. There is no harvest. Heavy to withering, the black wheels bend Ripe for the mouths of chance lovers, Or birds.
Twigs show again in the quick cleavage of season and season. The elders sag over the powdery road-bank, As though they bore, and it were too much, The seed of the year beyond the year.
Louise Bogan was loath to discuss her private life, and therefore skeptical of confessional poetry, preferring to write verse about subjects separate from the poet's identity.
Louise Bogan was born in Livermore Falls, Maine, on August 11, 1897. As a writer, Bogan was known for tending to reject many of the trends of modernist poetry. She was a longtime poetry reviewer for The New Yorker, and was the 1959 recipient of the Academy of American Poets Fellowship. She died in 1970.
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